This was so perfect and I loved the tone of your writing, the way Brian and Justin are observed by the 3rd Person voice was written in my most favorite of ways a writer approaches writing. Something I very much admire but am never able to accomplish in myself when writing in 3rd person pov.
The storytelling blended perfectly with the moments of the scenes showing what Brian and Justin were going through as fate (you) led them back to one another again in a way that was so THEM. I am sorry the request was tricky, it is a subject that I love so much because of how hard one must work to develop an 'acceptable' reasoning for it. The challenge of it is what I love to see unfolded, so thank you for doing it. I could read a million of these, because there is something about Justin having all the things Brian thought he needed to go get (without him) only to see Justin can never really have any of it, no matter what they both may want to believe, because without one another neither can be truly successful in the ways that truly last and matter in life.
You created a wonderful scenario for this and executed it beautifully. Thanks so much for writing this gift for me. :) Rory
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Date: 2013-01-02 02:05 pm (UTC)The storytelling blended perfectly with the moments of the scenes showing what Brian and Justin were going through as fate (you) led them back to one another again in a way that was so THEM. I am sorry the request was tricky, it is a subject that I love so much because of how hard one must work to develop an 'acceptable' reasoning for it. The challenge of it is what I love to see unfolded, so thank you for doing it. I could read a million of these, because there is something about Justin having all the things Brian thought he needed to go get (without him) only to see Justin can never really have any of it, no matter what they both may want to believe, because without one another neither can be truly successful in the ways that truly last and matter in life.
You created a wonderful scenario for this and executed it beautifully. Thanks so much for writing this gift for me.
:) Rory